Покритикуйте, пожалуйста, резюме.

  1. Вы наверное не в крановщики которым в нагрузку дают работу дояркой собираетесь? все мы здесь такие :slight_smile: нам лопату дали мы копаем, дали грабли мы гребем. Все ваши задачи будут из области ваших проф. знаний, никто не будет вас отправлять на кухню картошку чистить, а все остальное и так подразумевается. С технологиями немного другое, тут фраза может и пригодится.
  2. Скорей всего ваш диплом будет эвалюирован в Мастера, но можете заказать эвалюацию. Достаточно просто Saratov State University, на самом деле.

подредактировал резюме. Раскритикуйте, пожалуйста

<name>
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SENIOR SOFRWARE DEVELOPER

An accomplished Senior Software Developer with a professional experience in full stack software development and scientific research. Expertise includes Relational Databases, Web and Windows Services Programming, UI and UX Architecture, Development and Maintenance of High Load Systems, Agile Development Methodologies, Geo Information Systems, Estimation Work in Construction and CAD Systems.
Skilled to multi-disciplinary work. Oriented to detail in all aspects of software development. Pedantic to performance, versatility, expandability and code beauty. Quickly adapt to new technologies.

Professional Experience
8 / 2015 – Present, Lead Software Engineer, Centrgazservis Company, Saratov, Russia
As a Lead Engineer, I am leading a team that is developing a Geo-Information System and I am responsible for technological development of company projects. I also take an important part in the development of our main High Load System. During the month of my work, as a Lead Engineer, I have reached a general increase performance by 50%.
Responsibilities:
• Desktop, Front-end and Back-end developing.
• Team Leading.
• Scientific research works in the direction of Geo-Information Technologies.
• Performance analysis.
• Training for Junior professionals.
Accomplishments:
• Developed the Geo-Information System that supports all known file formats, including an interactive map of oil and gas fields, their production facilities and other specific objects.
• Improve the performance of the main High Load System by 50%.

9 / 2013 – 8 / 2015, Senior Software Engineer, Centrgazservis Company, Saratov, Russia
As a Senior Software Engineer, I was responsible for full lifecycle development of software for construction industry. I developed some very useful applications that had helped to automate a work of entire departments. Furthermore, it brought a solid profit.
Responsibilities:
• Desktop, Front-end and Back-end developing.
• Database management.
• Technical design.
Accomplishments:
• Developed the highly efficient system of licensing.
• Developed the budget cost execution editor.
• Developed a unique system of comparing XLS-documents.

4 / 2012 – 9 / 2013, Software Engineer, Centrgazservis Company, Saratov, Russia
As a Software Engineer, I had participated in development process of main High Load system. I developed many useful utilities for development automation and assembly versions. Moreover, I got some experience in estimation of construction cost.
Responsibilities:
• Desktop and Back-end developing.
• Database management.
• Project maintenance.
Accomplishments:
• Automated the process of assembly and installing new versions of software at the customer.
• Got the knowledge in construction industry.

6 / 2009 – 4 / 2012, Software .NET Developer as freelancer, Saratov, Russia
An experience as freelancer in development of business applications, utilities, services, plug-ins and games. During this period, I got a big amount of experience in different areas of software development.
Responsibilities:
• Implementation and development of .NET-based applications.
• Implementation and development of an indie games.
Accomplishments:
• Got a lot of experience in creating multi-threaded applications.
• Got a lot of experience in performance optimization.
• Developed my first indie game.

TECHNICAL SKILLS
Programming languages: C#, C++\CLI, C\C++, VB.NET, PHP.
Script languages: JavaScript, VBScript, XML, KML
User Interface: ASP.NET, HTML, DHTML, AJAX, CSS, CartoCSS, XSLT, XAML.
RDBMS\DBMS: MS SQL Server, MySQL, SQLite (MBTiles), CouchDB.
Frameworks: .NET Framework, Entity Framework, ExtJS, jQuery, Open Layers, Leaflet, XNA Framework, Zend Framework.
Technologies: WCF, WPF, Silverlight
Methodologies & Environments: Object-Oriented Programming (OOP), Object-Oriented Design (OOD), Rapid Application Design (RAD), Inversion of Control (IoC), Dependency Injection (DI), DevOps, Test-Driven Development (TDD), UML, Agile Project Management, Scrum.
IDE’s: MS Visual Studio 2008 – 2015, MS SQL Management Studio, Borland C++ Builder, Intellij IDEA, NetBeans IDE.
Development Tools: TortoiseSVN, JetBrains ReSharper, JetBrains dotTrace, JSLint, Git.
Software: Autodesk AutoCAD (Map 3D/Civil 3D), Autodesk Infrastructure Map Server (AIMS), Map Guide, MS Office, Internet Information Services (IIS), Apache.

EDUCATION
2011, M. Sc. in Computer Science, State Technical University, Saratov Russia

1 - Прогон резюме через спелчекер обязателен!
и тогда

SOFRWARE

окажется software

An accomplished Senior Software Developer with a professional experience in full stack software development and scientific research.

Тут как бы предполагается продолжение… А то получается как то

Молодой крокодил
вместо
Молодой крокодил хочет завести себе друзей.

Разбейте это на две части
1 - Objective
2 - Profile

Например:

Senior Software engineer

Senior Software engineer (Full stack) experienced in scientific research and High Load Systems looking for next career step in San Francisco Bay Area.

Profile

[ul]
[li]Over 6 years of hands-on experience in full stack development[/li][li]Deep knowledge in Development and Maintenance of High Load Systems[/li][li]Understanding of UI and UX Architecture[/li][li]Experienced in Web and Windows Services development[/li][li]Extensive experience in Relational Databases[/li][li]Familiar with Geo Information Systems[/li][li]Proficient with Estimation Work in Construction and CAD Systems[/li][li]Additional experience in an Agile environment[/li][li]Quickly adapts to new technologies[/li][/ul]

Дальше по шаблону должно идти:
TECHNICAL SKILLS
Programming: C#, C++\CLI, C\C++, VB.NET, ASP.NET, PHP
Scripting: JavaScript (Ecma), ExtJS, jQuery, VBScript, XML, KML, HTML, DHTML, AJAX, CSS, CartoCSS, XSLT, XAML
Databases: MS SQL Server, MySQL, SQLite (MBTiles), CouchDB
Frameworks: .NET Framework, Entity Framework, Open Layers, Leaflet, XNA Framework, Zend Framework
Technologies: WCF, WPF, Silverlight
Methodologies & Environments: Object-Oriented Programming (OOP), Object-Oriented Design (OOD), Rapid Application Design (RAD), Inversion of Control (IoC), Dependency Injection (DI), DevOps, Test-Driven Development (TDD), UML, Agile Project Management, Scrum
IDE: MS Visual Studio, MS SQL Management Studio, Borland C++ Builder, Intellij IDEA, NetBeans IDE
Development Tools: TortoiseSVN, JetBrains ReSharper, JetBrains dotTrace, JSLint, Git
Web servers: Internet Information Services (IIS), Apache
Software: Autodesk AutoCAD (Map 3D/Civil 3D), Autodesk Infrastructure Map Server (AIMS), Map Guide, MS Office

По поводу опыта, я всеже предлагаю писать не

Responsibilities:
• Desktop, Front-end and Back-end developing.
• Team Leading.
• Scientific research works in the direction of Geo-Information Technologies.
• Performance analysis.
• Training for Junior professionals.
Accomplishments:
• Developed the Geo-Information System that supports all known file formats, including an interactive map of oil and gas fields, their production facilities and other specific objects.
• Improve the performance of the main High Load System by 50%.

А человеческим языком с ключевыми словами

As lead of … team was responsible for A, B, C and D of/on E infrastructures/systems/products.

А дальше уже булетами что вы там делали и чего добились

[ul]
[li]Scientific research works in the direction of Geo-Information Technologies[/li][li]Performance analysis[/li][li]Training for Junior professionals[/li][li]Developed the Geo-Information System that supports all known file formats, including an interactive map of oil and gas fields, their production facilities and other specific objects[/li][li]Improve the performance of the main High Load System by 50%[/li][/ul]

В конце каждой позиции список из скилз

Environment: ASP.Net, WCF, HTML, CSS, XML, XSLT, SOAP, JQuery, JavaScript

Согласуйте все времена в резюме (рекомендую все в 3 лице прошедшего времени)

ИМХО

Привет всем!
Сегодня был у рекрутера на интервью, немного поговорили с ним про резюме.
Я например свое составлял так чтобы уместить на 1 страницу. Причем мне помогал делать резюме человек который причастен к трудоустройству студентов школы М.Портного.
Но рекрутер мне обещал скинуть свой пример, и таки скинул. ИМХО простыня у него какая то а не резюме. Скидываю вам на суд этот его пример.
Что думаете? Стараться сделать на 1 лист или вот так расписывать, или что то среднее?

Вот резюме
NAME

OBJECTIVE

Looking for innovative, challenging employment that will utilize my experience and professional skills and offer advancement opportunity

EXPERIENCE SUMMARY

• Over 8 years of IT experience including requirement gathering, analysis, and testing of software Systems.
• Automation testing experience using open source tool Selenium WebDriver.
• Expertise in domains like e-Commerce, Finance and Insurance Domains.
• Good knowledge in Software Development Life Cycle (SDLC) and Software Testing Life Cycle (STLC).
• Experienced in writing the Test Plan, Test Scenarios, Test cases, Test Execution Summary Report and Defect Tracking.
• Experienced in conducting Manual Testing, Integration Testing, System Testing, Functional Testing, Database Testing, Mobile App testing, White box testing, End-To-End Testing of WEB Applications.
• Good knowledge of mobile platforms such as Android and iOS.
• Experienced in testing concepts like waterfall and Agile testing methodologies.
• Performed database testing to validate the data.
• Experienced in testing Web applications for browser compatibility.
• Experience in testing SOAP and REST web services.
• Experience in using Mercury Quality Center, TFS, and Rally for gathering requirements, planning, analyzing results, storing, and Customizing reports in Dashboard and executing Scripts.
• Meeting with client at regular intervals to update the project progress and solutions to be adopted to solve the issues / concerns.
• Preparing the metrics and Test Result Summary reports.
• Worked with cross functional team to clarify the requirements and provided input from testing perspective
• Leading and coordinating with a small team of offshore QA testers

Software Expertise:

Testing Tools : Web Driver, HP Quality Center (Mercury Quality Center), TFS, MTM, QTP 8.6, 9.0, TestLink, Kanbanery, Firebug ,Rally
Defect Tracking Tools : Bugzilla, Quality Center, Trac, JIRA
Languages : VB Script, SQL and Java , HTML,XML
Database : Oracle 9i/8i/7.3, SQL Server , and MS Access, DB2
Database Utilities : Toad 7.0, DB visualizer, SQL developer.
Operating Systems : Windows (7/XP / NT 4.0 / 2000/2003), UNIX, and Linux.
Version Controllers : Maven, Git, Perforce

SEAWORLD PARKS & ENTERTAINMENT (Orlando, FL) June 15-Till date
Sr. Quality Analyst

SeaWorld Parks & Entertainment is a renowned entertainment company which operates and maintains eleven theme parks located throughout the United States.

The project involves enhancements to the end user’s purchasing experience on both SeaWorld’s Mobile Applications and Websites and changes to the Inventory Management system to efficiently manage the inventory

Responsibilities:

• Involved in requirement review and analysis of the acceptance criteria
• Performed extensive Web and Mobile app testing on the SeaWorld park websites and mobile apps
• Provided input on test estimates, QA timelines and QA resource planning
• Developed test plans and test cases for multiple projects
• Performed thorough feature testing, regression testing, integration testing, data base testing, end to end testing and backward compatibility testing on websites and mobile apps
• Performed testing on SeaWorld parks’ Mobile apps on iOS and Android platforms
• Tested REST APIs using Advanced REST client
• Provided UAT support during UAT testing
• Maintained test cases and test metrics using TFS and MTM
• Used JIRA to log and track the project defects
• Coordinated with Business analysts and product owners to clarify the requirements and scope
• Worked with cross functional teams and third party vendors to get the defects resolved on timely manner
• Scheduled daily status meetings to provide the defect status update and review the defects
• Provided release support during production deployments by running smoke tests
• Performed testing on sustainment tickets
• Attended stand up meetings to provide the status of the project and to notify any challenges that impact QA timelines

AUTODESK INC. (San Francisco, CA) Mar’14-May '15
Sr. Quality Analyst

Autodesk, Inc. is an American multinational software corporation that makes software for the architecture, engineering, construction, manufacturing, media, and entertainment industries.

The project involves building UI for in-product purchase experience for customers and integrating it with customer portal for account information.

Responsibilities:

• Involved in requirement analysis and backlog grooming sessions
• Reviewed user stories in each sprint and wrote test cases
• Involved in functional testing and integration testing of user stories
• Performed mobile testing of customer portal application on iPad and Android OS and iOS platforms
• Tested the application under different networks and Internet speed
• Gave demos to the product owners to get the user stories accepted
• Used Rally as agile management tool and logged defects in the rally to track them
• Worked with cross functional teams to understand and refine the requirements
• Maintained automation framework by updating the property files and configuration files
• Used Jenkins as Continuous integration tool and created jobs to run automation test cases
• Used Perforce as repository and version controller.
• Provided status updates during standup meetings.
• Coordinating with offshore team to provide KT on functional aspects of application

Environment: Java, HTML, XML, REST, SOAP,Windows XP, JIRA, Rally, Firebug, Selenium Webdriver, Perforce, Jenkins.

SEARS HOLDINGS CORP. (Hoffman Estates, IL) Aug’13-Feb’14
Sr. QA Analyst

PDP Redesign

Sears Holdings Corp. is a leading integrated retailer with almost 2,500 full-line and specialty retail stores in the United States and Canada.
The PDP Phase project Phase 1 & 2, involve redesigning the product details page of Sears.com website for variety of products in order to ensure better customer experience. As part of the redesign, new features have been introduced in PDP, Quickview and Compare pages.

Responsibilities:

• Reviewed user stories and designed test plan and test scenarios.
• Executed the test cases and reported bugs in JIRA
• Used Kanbanery as the agile project management tool
• Coordinated with offshore to assign the tasks and to get status updates
• Interacted with business analysts and SMEs to clarify requirements and updated the scenarios
• Tested GUI and functionality on Windows 7, Mac OS X, Android, iOS platforms reported defects
• Executed the smoke test suite and regression test suite on new builds and monitored the run
• Participated in daily and weekly scrum meetings
• Maintained automation framework by updating the property files and configuration files
• Acted as point of contact during release process
• Done functional, regression, UAT and DB testing
• Used DB Visualizer to query DB2 database
• Analyzed hourly automation test report and provided the status

Environment: Java, HTML, XML, Windows XP, DB2, SQL, JIRA, Android, iOS, Mac OSX, Kanbanery.

STATE FARM INSURANCE CO.(Bloomington, IL)
Sr.QA Analyst Nov’12-Aug’13

ICP-Integrated Customer Platform

State Farm Insurance is a leading group of insurance and financial services companies offering services in auto, fire, health and life insurance. The project is about customizing the online claims application called Life and Health Claims handling System (LHCS) according to State farm needs in order to process life and health claims.

Responsibilities:

• Involved in requirements gathering and analysis
• Reviewed Solution specific documents, RTM, technical documents
• Reviewed use cases, test scenarios and test cases for proper coverage of positive and negative scenarios
• Involved in functional, regression, integrations and UAT testing
• Coordinated with developers and Business analysts while doing gap analysis
• Coordinated with offshore team to clarify the requirements and functionalities
• Tested Claims application for browser compatibility.
• Daily status meetings
• Covered end to end scenarios, reporting defects in Trac system
• Involved in integration testing and reviewed integration test scenarios.
• Tested webservices using soapUI

Environment: Java, TestLink, Trac, Selenium IDE, WebDriver, TestNG, GRID, HTML, XML, UNIX, Unix, SoapUI, SQL, DB2, ANT 1.8.0, Maven, Windows 7

CTB-McGraw-Hill (Monterey, CA) Nov’10—Sep’12
QA Analyst

CTB.com is web-based application, an Official Website for CTB/McGraw-Hill. The CTB.com is
a Unified Portal for CTB’s customers to find product related Information, Order Products/
Services and Access Custom Contract applications, that interoperates seamlessly. The existing
CTB.com application that is running in production was developed using Blue Martini
Framework. Due to certain limitations of Blue Martini, the application is being revised and
Ported to OFBiz framework. The existing CTB.com Application will be replaced in phased manner with the newly developed Application.Re-design of the website to support Web 2.

Responsibilities:

• Involved in complete QA Life Cycle
• Design of the test cases for the e-commerce checkout process.
• Tested CTB.com website for browser compatibility by testing on browsers like IE, Firefox and Chrome
• Involved in functional, integration testing and mobile testing of web application
• Tested GUI and functionality on Android OS and iOS platforms
• Used MS Excel to create scripts in data-driven framework.
• Experience working using Agile methodology.
• Participated in Estimation meetings, daily scrum meetings to discuss the progress of Sprint.
• Done regression testing at end of each sprint to ensure overall quality of product.
• Prepared Test Cases for GUI application.
• Analysing the use cases, preparation and review of test cases.
• Executing tests and reporting defects

Environment: Java, JUnit, HTML, XML, UNIX, Android, iOS, Quality Center 9.2, Windows 7 , PL/SQL Server.

LIMITED BRANDS (Columbus, OH)
Victoria Secrets Direct – Front End Application
QA Analyst Apr’10 – Nov’10

Limited Stores is one of the leading Retail Company with six different brands and over 3500 stores. Victoria Secrets is one of the major brands among them.

The Front End project phase 1 will deliver a re-platform front-end Victoria Secret Direct (VSD) website based on the current VSD site functionality with additional personalization and Rich Internet Apps (RIA) “quick look” & shopping cart capabilities.

Responsibilities:

• Reviewed functional documents and executed UAT test cases.
• Assisted in preparing Test data.
• Executed the test cases on different releases and validated the actual results against the expected results.
• Logging Defects into Quality Center to track defects.
• Facilitated meetings to review defect and also helped the development team to duplicate defects.
• Involved in Regression testing and End-to-End testing.
• Interacted with team members and coordinating with teams for Weekly Status updates regarding progress of the work done in application.

Environment: Mercury Quality Center IX, QTP 8.6, Java, .Net, Windows XP, XML, Oracle 10i, SQL Server 2000, AS/400, PeopleSoft, DB2, MS Project and Visual SourceSafe.

WACHOVIA CORPORATION (Trenton, NJ) Mar’08–Feb’10
Test Analyst

Wachovia is one of the major financial corporations. Wachovia buys mortgage loans from different vendors. The purpose of the project is to complete all of the activities necessary to convert mortgage loan data from the seller’s into the Wachovia mortgage system.
Responsibilities:

• Involved in the preparation of test plan.
• Wrote test scripts to execute the test cases for different modules.
• Executed the test scripts on different releases and validated the actual results against the expected results.
• Created test cases according to the business spec and listing of test requirements at very high level.
• Created and executed test cases for UI testing.
• Entered Critical, High as well as medium and low defects in the defect tracking system called Bugzilla.
• As a Backend tester, conducted Data Integrity testing by extensive use of SQL on SQL Server.
• Interacted with team members and coordinating with teams (Development, Business, and QA) for Weekly Status updates regarding progress of the work done in application.
• Conducted Functional, Regression and Performance testing at different levels.
• Preparation of Project schedule using MS Project.

Environment: ASP 3.0, Visual Basic 6.0, XML, SQL Server 2000, MS Access, DB2, VBScript, Java Script, CSS, XSL, Visual Studio 6.0, Test Director 7.6, WinRunner7.6, Bugzilla, Windows2000, MS Project.

Отлично у рекрутера все, прям как я рассказываю обычно людям. Полистайте страниц 10 назад, там прям все так и вдалбливается людям, и что размер не важен если есть что написать и чем гордится. Не знаю за содержание и английский, но фармат абсолютно правильный

Спасибо, еще раз за критику.
Внес правки, согласно последним замечаниям. Напрямую блока Objectives решил избежать, т.к. эта информация будет пересекаться с Cover Letter. Возможно стоит его как-нибудь перефразировать?

(name)
(address)

SENIOR SOFTWARE ENGINEER
• Over 6 years of hands-on experience in Full Stack development.
• Deep knowledge in Development and Maintenance of High Load Systems.
• Experienced in Web and Windows Services development.
• Extensive experience in Relational Databases.
• Solid understanding of UI and UX Architecture.
• Familiar with Geo-Information Systems.
• Proficient with Estimation Work in Construction and CAD Systems.
• Additional experience in Agile Software Development.
• Skilled to multi-disciplinary work.
• Oriented to detail in all aspects of software development.
• Pedantic to performance, versatility, expandability and code beauty.
• Dedicated to keeping up with new technologies and applying them to solve business needs.

TECHNICAL SKILLS
Programming languages: C#, C++\CLI, C\C++, ASP.NET, VB.NET, PHP.
Script languages: JavaScript, VBScript, HTML, DHTML, AJAX, CSS, CartoCSS, XML, KML, XSLT, XAML.
RDBMS\DBMS: MS SQL Server, MySQL, SQLite (MBTiles), CouchDB.
Frameworks: .NET Framework, Entity Framework, ExtJS, jQuery, Open Layers, Leaflet, XNA Framework, Zend Framework.
Technologies: Windows Forms, WCF, WPF, Silverlight.
Methodologies & Environments: Object-Oriented Programming (OOP), Object-Oriented Design (OOD), Rapid Application Design (RAD), Inversion of Control (IoC), Dependency Injection (DI), DevOps, Test-Driven Development (TDD), UML, Agile Project Management, Scrum.
IDE’s: MS Visual Studio 2008 – 2015, MS SQL Management Studio, Borland C++ Builder, Intellij IDEA, NetBeans IDE.
Development Tools: TortoiseSVN, JetBrains ReSharper, JetBrains dotTrace, JSLint, Git.
Web servers: Internet Information Services (IIS), Apache.
Software: Autodesk AutoCAD (Map 3D/Civil 3D), Autodesk Infrastructure Map Server (AIMS), Map Guide, MS Office.

PROFESSIONAL EXPERIENCE
8/2015 – Present, Lead Software Engineer, Centrgazservis Company, Saratov, Russia
As Lead of a team, was responsible for development of Geo-Information System, scientific research works in the direction of Geo-Information Technologies, technological improvement of company projects, development and maintenance the desktop, front-end and back-end applications, performance analysis and training of junior professionals.
Accomplishments:
• Developed the Geo-Information System that supports all known file formats, including an interactive map of oil and gas fields, their production facilities and other specific objects.
• Increase knowledge in Geographic Science and its adaptation in the area of Information Technologies.
• Improve the performance of the main High Load System by 50%.
Environment: C#, ASP.NET, JavaScript, ExtJS, OpenLayers, Leaflet, AJAX, Entity Framework, Windows Forms, MS SQL Server, SQLite (MBTiles), CouchDB , XML, KML, DHTML, CSS, CartoCSS, WCF.

9/2013 – 8/2015, Senior Software Engineer, Centrgazservis Company, Saratov, Russia
As a Senior Software Engineer, was responsible for full lifecycle development of software for construction industry, technical design, database management. Developed some very useful desktop, front-end and back-end applications that had helped to automate a work of entire departments.
Accomplishments:
• Developed the highly efficient system of licensing.
• Developed the budget cost execution editor.
• Developed a unique system of comparing XLS-documents.
Environment: C#, ASP.NET, JavaScript, C++\CLI, ExtJS, jQuery, AJAX, Entity Framework, Windows Forms, MS SQL Server, XML, HTML, DHTML, CSS, WCF, XSLT.

4/2012 – 9/2013, Software Engineer, Centrgazservis Company, Saratov, Russia
As a Software Engineer, was responsible for development and maintenance of main High Load system. Developed many useful utilities for
development automation and assembly versions. Ensure the quality of the database.
Accomplishments:
• Automated the process of assembly and installing new versions of software at the customer.
• Developed flexible parsers for Text-based and XML-based file formats.
• Got the knowledge in construction industry.
Environment: C#, ASP.NET, VB.NET, JavaScript, jQuery, AJAX, Windows Forms, MS SQL Server, XML.

6/2009 – 4/2012, .NET Software Developer as freelancer, Saratov, Russia
An experience as freelancer in software development. Developed and implemented a variety websites, services and .NET-based applications, some
indie games.
Accomplishments:
• Got a lot of experience in creating multi-threaded applications.
• Got a lot of experience in performance optimization.
• Developed a DNA sequencing simulation service.
• Developed a system of groundwater analysis.
• Developed my first indie game.
Environment: C#, C\C++, ASP.NET, VB.NET, Windows Forms, XNA Framework, WPF, Silverlight, MySQL, XML, PHP, Zend Framework.

EDUCATION
2011, M. Sc. in Computer Science, State Technical University, Saratov Russia

У вас нет необходимости в кавер леттер. В IT ее нет, может только если уж совсем нет опыта или опыт не пересекается с требованиями.

Accomplishments: - удалите (и так понятно)
Все остальное на мой взгляд отлично, очень приличный потенциал.
Если вы работу на визу ищите уточните это в профайле, если у вас ГК то тоже уточните что нет необходимости в спонсорстве, т.к. весь опыт за границей надо это уточнить.
Последней строкой в резюме
References are available upon request

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Привет. Получил вот гринку и готовлюсь осваивать научные просторы юс. Почитал ветку и привел свое резюме и сиви к такому виду. Поругайте пожалуйста, что не так (кроме интервалов, их почему-то попячило в гдокс).

сиви: Google Drive: Sign-in
резюме: Vedenii Zaikov.doc - Google Drive

Сиви рассылаю на research позиции, а просто резюме lab technician/research assistant.

Вопрос 1, что делать с незащищенной аспирантурой? В план до апреля пройти предзащиту. На некоторых сайтах есть галочка PhD in progress, поэтому решил тулить в сиви т.к. опыт все же, даже без корочки.

Вопрос 2, что местное сообщество считает правильным переводом «научный сотрудник»?

Вопрос 3, а есть смысл дописать вообще ВСЕ тезисы, в которые был включен и тезисы с не очень значимых конференций?

Здравствуйте, буду рад конструктивной критике резюме инженера-конструктора.
Сразу скажу, что не питаю иллюзий найти спонсора рабочей визы с такой специальностью и в этой области, но хочется, на всякий случай, иметь наготове более-менее приличную заготовку.
Заранее благодарен.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/12M2jheDZWa6dOBiLw-Roy6iUU4XyN21-oOCZXprWdcE/edit?usp=sharing

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Bulat Khydyrmagambetov (m)
01/11/2015

Republic of Kazakhstan,
Micro-district 27, house 53, apt. 5,
Aktau city, 130000
+7 (7292) 412 631 (home)
+7 702 123 70 71(mob.)
b.khydyrmagambetov@gmail.com

PERSONAL INFORMATION:
Date/Place of Birth: 02 september 1984, Aktau, Republic of Kazakhstan
Speaking Languages: Kazakh, Russian, English
Marital Status: Married

CAREER OBJECTIVE:
Experienced and accomplished reservoir/petroleum engineer with over 8 years of experience looking to leverage extensive background in oil & gas extraction into a reservoir/petroleum engineer position.
SUMMARY OF QUALIFICATIONS:
• 8 years of comprehensive reservoir engineering experience;
• Extensive unconventional high viscous oil field development experience;
• Unquestionable ability to apply appropriate reservoir engineering techniques;
• Solid Experience of reservoir engineering aspects of different reservoir systems;
• Excellent communication skills-written, verbal and presentation skills;
• Remarkable ability to work in multi-disciplinary teams consisting of drilling, completion geologists and production engineers;
• Highly analytical thinking with demonstrated talent for identifying, improving and streamlining complex work processes;
• Computer-literate performer with extensive software proficiency covering wide variety of applications;
• Proven relationship-builder with interpersonal skills;
• Resourceful team player who excels at building trusting relationships with colleagues.
PROFESSIONAL EXPERIENCE:
2006-2007
“AZST” JSC - Aktau plant of fiberglass pipes”, Aktau, Kazakhstan
Production Technical Department, constructing group

2007 – 2012
Aktau Research and Design Institute of Oil and Gas, Kazakhstan,
Junior Reservoir Engineer

• Developed working relationships with oil & gas operating company representatives to provide them with scientific engineering consultancy in reservoir development issues;
• Assisted in designing of various reservoir development projects: project of development and testing phase production, oil & gas field technological scheme and author supervision for them.
• Coordinated with geologists, geophysicists, drilling and production engineers on various projects;
• Assisted in compiling the geological and simulation models;
• Charting isobaric and bubble maps, well location maps;

Ребят, всех приветствую, меня тоже по"criticize"те))))))))

Bulat Khydyrmagambetov (m)
01/11/2015

Republic of Kazakhstan,
Micro-district 27, house 53, apt. 5,
Aktau city, 130000
+7 (7292) 412 631 (home)
+7 702 123 70 71(mob.)
b.khydyrmagambetov@gmail.com

PERSONAL INFORMATION:
Date/Place of Birth: 02 september 1984, Aktau, Republic of Kazakhstan
Speaking Languages: Kazakh, Russian, English
Marital Status: Married

CAREER OBJECTIVE:
Experienced and accomplished reservoir/petroleum engineer with over 8 years of experience looking to leverage extensive background in oil & gas extraction into a reservoir/petroleum engineer position.
SUMMARY OF QUALIFICATIONS:
• 8 years of comprehensive reservoir engineering experience;
• Extensive unconventional high viscous oil field development experience;
• Unquestionable ability to apply appropriate reservoir engineering techniques;
• Solid Experience of reservoir engineering aspects of different reservoir systems;
• Excellent communication skills-written, verbal and presentation skills;
• Remarkable ability to work in multi-disciplinary teams consisting of drilling, completion geologists and production engineers;
• Highly analytical thinking with demonstrated talent for identifying, improving and streamlining complex work processes;
• Computer-literate performer with extensive software proficiency covering wide variety of applications;
• Proven relationship-builder with interpersonal skills;
• Resourceful team player who excels at building trusting relationships with colleagues.
PROFESSIONAL EXPERIENCE:
2006-2007
“AZST” JSC - Aktau plant of fiberglass pipes”, Aktau, Kazakhstan
Production Technical Department, constructing group

2007 – 2012
Aktau Research and Design Institute of Oil and Gas, Kazakhstan,
Junior Reservoir Engineer

• Developed working relationships with oil & gas operating company representatives to provide them with scientific engineering consultancy in reservoir development issues;
• Assisted in designing of various reservoir development projects: project of development and testing phase production, oil & gas field technological scheme and author supervision for them.
• Coordinated with geologists, geophysicists, drilling and production engineers on various projects;
• Assisted in compiling the geological and simulation models;
• Charting isobaric and bubble maps, well location maps;

Привет всем, меня тоже поругайте немного:)

Bulat Khydyrmagambetov (m)
01/11/2015

Republic of Kazakhstan,
Micro-district 27, house 53, apt. 5,
Aktau city, 130000
+7 (7292) 412 631 (home)
+7 702 123 70 71(mob.)
b.khydyrmagambetov@gmail.com

PERSONAL INFORMATION:
Date/Place of Birth: 02 september 1984, Aktau, Republic of Kazakhstan
Speaking Languages: Kazakh, Russian, English
Marital Status: Married

CAREER OBJECTIVE:
Experienced and accomplished reservoir/petroleum engineer with over 8 years of experience looking to leverage extensive background in oil & gas extraction into a reservoir/petroleum engineer position.
SUMMARY OF QUALIFICATIONS:
• 8 years of comprehensive reservoir engineering experience;
• Extensive unconventional high viscous oil field development experience;
• Unquestionable ability to apply appropriate reservoir engineering techniques;
• Solid Experience of reservoir engineering aspects of different reservoir systems;
• Excellent communication skills-written, verbal and presentation skills;
• Remarkable ability to work in multi-disciplinary teams consisting of drilling, completion geologists and production engineers;
• Highly analytical thinking with demonstrated talent for identifying, improving and streamlining complex work processes;
• Computer-literate performer with extensive software proficiency covering wide variety of applications;
• Proven relationship-builder with interpersonal skills;
• Resourceful team player who excels at building trusting relationships with colleagues.
PROFESSIONAL EXPERIENCE:
2006-2007
“AZST” JSC - Aktau plant of fiberglass pipes”, Aktau, Kazakhstan
Production Technical Department, constructing group

2007 – 2012
Aktau Research and Design Institute of Oil and Gas, Kazakhstan,
Junior Reservoir Engineer

• Developed working relationships with oil & gas operating company representatives to provide them with scientific engineering consultancy in reservoir development issues;
• Assisted in designing of various reservoir development projects: project of development and testing phase production, oil & gas field technological scheme and author supervision for them.
• Coordinated with geologists, geophysicists, drilling and production engineers on various projects;
• Assisted in compiling the geological and simulation models;
• Charting isobaric and bubble maps, well location maps;

November 2012 – present
“Karazhanbasmunai” CITIC Group and E&P KazMunaigaz JSC, Aktau, Kazakhstan.
Geology and Field Development Department, petroleum engineer.
Компания
• Analysed production performance data and recommended activities in order to improve well performance and assisted in planning remedial well activity as required;
• Assisted in compiling the field development plan, together with providing technical support during the development drilling phase;
• Assisted in developing plans and proposals across the full life-cycle of oil field with the aim of optimizing use of company funds.
• Conducted reservoir engineering studies (including analytical and simulation techniques as appropriate);
• Generated forecasts and reserved estimates to meet internal DRR, Business Plan, Budget and external reporting requirements;
• Conduct decline curve, surveillance analysis;
• Executing back allocation of daily oil, gas and water production/hot water, steam injection using appropriate software;
• Analysis and monitoring of steam injection wells;
• Assisted to formulate daily/monthly/quarterly field development reports to be reviewed by shareholders.

EDUCATION:
• Bachelor of Science Degree in Petroleum Engineering,
Kazakh National Technical University, Almaty city, 2006

COMPUTER SKILLS:

 Eclipse BlackOil (Geoquest Reservoir Simulator) Schlumberger Software;
 Petrel RE (Geoquest Reservoir Software) Schlumberger Software;
 OFM (Oil Field Manager) Schlumberger Software;
 Avocet Data Manager, Schlumberger Software;
Good user of Multi Operating Systems: MS-Windows 9x, N

В целом - сойдет.
Мелкое:
Production вместо extracting.
H-1B VISA SPONSORSHIP REQUIRED - в дальний конец и не выделять заглавными, сейчас сильно режет глаз.
В профиле слабо с конкретикой, в основном слова ни о чем.
Судя по выпячиванию опыта в черчении и отсутствии расчетов, то резюме ближе к позиции designer/drafter, а не mechanical engineer. Если mechanical designer, то нужно показать владение программами расчета трубных обвязок, стресс-анализов, сосудов и пр. Также знание ASME, API, NFPA и подобных для рынка работы в США.
Слова Responsibilities и Achievements просто выбросить.
Не нравится слово Composed, заменить на prepared или developed хотя бы.
Выбросить вот это или написать по-другому - (curr UrFU)

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Не льстите себе.

Date/Place of Birth: 02 september 1984, Aktau, Republic of Kazakhstan
Speaking Languages: Kazakh, Russian, English
Marital Status: Married

Базовые навыки написния американских резюме у вас отсутствуют.
Это читали?

Good user of Multi Operating Systems: MS-Windows 9x, N
Венец всему.

Изучайте, как писать американское резюме, ищите ссылки на вывешенные резюме reservoir/petroleum engineers и переписывайте свое резюме по образцу.
Ни ваша сексуальная ориентация, ни семейные отношения, ни даже дата рождения никого не интересуют.

Еще возник вопрос: для позиции designer/drafter - насколько важно наличие сертификата SolidWorks (например, CSWP)? Стоит заморочиться получением сертификата, или это не настолько существенный момент?

года работы вперед поставьте, чтоб легче ориентироваться было

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Мне лично кажется, что совершенно не важно.
Могу ошибаться, возможно сыграет какую-то роль для поиска первой работы.