Резюме на критику!!!!!!!!!!

Добрый день. Прокритекуйте, пожалуйста, резюме моего мужа. Особенно об этом хотела попросить Михаила Портнова.

Mr. Sergii Svynarchuk
личная информация удалена
US Permanent Resident. Authorized to work;

OBJECTIVE

Looking for position avionic technician in maintenance department of commercial or business airline in USA.

SUMMARY OF QUALIFICATIONS:

• Graduated aircraft engineer (avionic)
• Accomplished Boeing B737-300/400/500 (CFM 56) B2 and A aircraft type training courses.
• Accomplished Boeing B767-200/300 (PW4000) B2 full training course
• Trained in the “Human factor in maintenance”
• Flight data requisition
• Maintenance at transit location Boeing B737-300/400/500 and B767-200/300
• ETOPS-works B767- 300

WORCK EXPERIENCE:

Line maintenance certifying avionic technician up to category B2 for
B737-300/400/500 and B767-200/300 aircraft: 2007- present

• Shift leader at company maintenance complex at outer based station.
• Certify defect rectification including RII
• Perform special inspection
• Deferred maintenance items
• Release aircraft to service
• Avionic system check and troubleshooting
• Special checks by ATC/NAV/FQIS/AIR DATA system test equipment

Line maintenance certifying avionic technician up to category B2 for
B737-300/400/500: 2006-2007

• Certify defect rectification including RII
• Perform special inspection
• Deferred maintenance items
• Avionic system check and troubleshooting
• Special checks by ATC/NAV/FQIS/AIR DATA system test equipment

Line maintenance mechanic for B737/300/400/500: 2005-2006

• Transit checks
• Light defect rectification

EDUCATION:

The National Aviation University of the Ukraine
Graduated with first class honest degree
Graduated in maintenance, Aeronautical Engineer (avionic background)

TRAINING

Mar 2006 Part 147 approved, “Boeing 737 Classic to 737-300/400/500 (CFM 56) B2 and A Aircraft type Maintenance Theoretical Training Course conducted by Training сеnter of Lithuanian Airlines.

Feb 2007 Part 147 approved “Boeing 767-200/300 (PW 4000) B2 Aircraft type Maintenance Training Course conducted by SAS Maintenance Training.

Nov 2007 Flight data requisition course conducted by Part 145 approved maintenance centre of Aerosvit Ukrainian Airlines.

Mar 2009 ETOPS works course conducted by Part 145 approved maintenance centre of Aerosvit Ukrainian Airlines

OTHER:
• Valid aircraft maintenance license ICAO (UCAA)
• Clean driving license
• Knowledge of written and spoken English
• Additional languages: Russian and Ukrainian
• Additional skills: very organized person having a strong team spirit, available to work under pressure to react to operational requirements and time constraints, available to work in multinational environment.
• Interest and leisure activities: traveling, cinema, swimming.

Заранее всем благодарна!!!

постарайтесь его перевести на правильный английский :frowning: … а потом мелочи поправьте (телефон чтобы штату (или хотя-бы стране) соответствовал и т.д. )

Меня две вещи в принципиальном плане напрягают:

  • местный адрес и неместный телефон
  • резюме не написано на английском языке и даже спелчекером не почищено.

OBJECTIVE

Может быть, что-то вроде:

Seeking a challenging position as an avionics technician that utilizes my work experience at … and knowledge of <commercial aircraft avionics maintenance>.