Покритикуйте, пожалуйста, резюме.

С железом нормально, проектировать и разводить цифровые схемы умею, но т.к. основная моя специализация софт, не стал упомянать это в резюме, теперь думаю стоит добавить это и список САПРов. Спаять тоже не проблема :slight_smile: Насчет английского я надеюсь уровня хватит, чтобы работать и в полностью англоязычной компании. По крайней мере несколько опытов общения с иностранцами у меня было и проблем с пониманием не возникло. С FPGA, DSP и embedded linux к сожалению пока опыта работы не было.

Здравствуйте, т.к. в теме “для ленивых” никто не откликнулся, решил выставить резюме на всеобщий обзор. Нужны ваши советы в исправлении ошибок, доработке.
Посмотреть можно тут: https://docs.google.com/document/d/16amYiq2y5KzuLNVKU4kYzbji4V-I8dWRez7GMYi_LL4/edit?usp=sharing
Ну и вдогонку, есть ли шансы получить работу по H-1B человеку с таким резюме? :slight_smile:

Интересы убрать.
В общем и целом резюме меня не зацепило и при поисках я бы не обратил внимание на Ваше резюме,даже если бы вы жили в моём городе и мне ненужно бы было совершать кучу телодвижений по перемещению вас в свою страну.
Я правда дальше Summary of qualifications и читать не стал, потому что в нем одна неубедительная вода.

Из советов, могу порекомендовать посмотреть 3 видел на ютубе которые Михаил Портнов записал по составлению резюме и поиску работы , там в сумме часа 3+ получается, я слушал уже по 2 раза и не жалею времени которое я провел за этим зантияем

Спасибо, видео действительно очень познавательные, я их смотрел, и в общем старался придерживаться советов господина Портнова. Формулировки старался подбирать собственного сочинения, чтобы не быть копипастой миллионов резюме, видимо поэтому получилось не слишком убедительно, т.к. моего владения языком для составления витиеватых оборотов недостаточно. Поэтому и обращаюсь за помощью :slight_smile:

Еще вопрос, возможно ли найти компанию в которой будет возможность поработать по программе J1 trainee? Где искать такие компании? Буду рад любым ссылкам и контактам! :slight_smile:

Добрый день! Если не сложно, посмотрите моё резюме! Жду поправок! Заранее спасибо.

https://docs.google.com/file/d/0B3iX9mM4UD8rSG8tR3hwZnZGclU/edit?usp=sharing

Константин, а кто вы? как называется ваша специальность? системный администратор тире разработчик?
Вам бы тоже не помешало парочку видео от Портного посмотреть про то как резюме на рынок США делать)
я думаю после того как вы посмотрите Ваше резюме преобразиться и многие вопросы отпадут

Друзья, гляньте пожалуйста. Ваши комментарии wormly appreciated :slight_smile:
https://docs.google.com/file/d/0B7mWEFw3kSmPN0RIdHd2aVB1UDA/edit?usp=sharing

Добрый день, форумчане!

Прошу и моё резюме “взять в оборот” и высказать комментарии и замечания.
Интересует только правильность направления, грамматику и слог буду поправлять когда будет общая картина в порядке.

Заранее благодарен!

IGOR FILAKHTOV
WEB DEVELOPER

Summary: Experienced web-developer with deep knowledges of web-based applications, services and related technologies. Specialized in building social-based services and corporate solutions. Have rich experience in developing successful web-platforms, frameworks and systems from scratch, without using any ready-made solutions. Deep understanding of development process – from designing and planning, up to integration and further support.

Objectives: Seeking for growth oriented position where my professional skills can be utilized. Want to be a part of challenging team, developing of exclusive and innovative web-based software solutions. Interested in social-oriented services development and business processes improvement using best IT practices and solutions.

SKILLS & TECHNOLOGIES:

Primary: 8 years of PHP, MySQL, HTML, XHTML, CSS development; 7 years of JavaScript, DHTML development; OOP, Programming patterns; JSON, AJAX, XML; LAMP stack; Linux/Unix OSes (FreeBSD, Debian, Ubuntu, Gentoo); MVC; Web-services, RPCs; HTTP, HTTPS, SSL, SSH, FTP, SFTP; SVN, Git; W3C standards; Nginx.

Secondary: Linux/Unix shell scripting; Networking security and administration; Wireless networks infrastructure; Adobe Photoshop; Graphics and design concepts; CRM, SCM, ERP solutions.

Complementary: C, C++; Corel Draw; Blender 3D software; Callcenter solutions.

Development environment: Gentoo linux OS, NetBeans IDE.

Languages: Russian, Ukrainian — freely, English — intermediate.

PROFESSIONAL EXPERIENCE:

WebShark Studio (ZWeb Studio)
Co-founder, Senior Web Developer
(Feb 2007 - Aug 2011)
Kherson, Ukraine
Company specialized on creating a wide range of web-applications, starting from basic homepages, ending with fully dynamic, complex business projects with external APIs and custom RPC services. Development was highly focused on performance, security and code standards.
During work in WebShark I have fully switched my development environment to Linux OS. In mid of 2008, company started providing its own hosting system with ISPManager on top of FreeBSD OS, and I began to learn Unix systems administration.
A strong modularized object-oriented database-driven multi purpose web-based platform was built and successfully used in a dozen of projects.
The result of over 4.5 years was the release of the company on Ukrainian market and strengthen its position among competitors.

Raiffeisen Bank Aval
Chief specialist of Internal Processes Technological Support Team, Team lead
(Sep 2011 - Dec 2012)
Kyiv, Ukraine
Raiffeisen Bank Aval is the largest Ukrainian bank with foreign capital. During my career here, I got the experience and understanding of business processes “from within”.
I worked as a manager in a team of 7 developers. Our team has designed, developed and integrated complex CRM solution, used by employees in all 800+ bank’s branches, central office, call center and many other’s divisions every day.
In order to develop such a large complex system, I established a new special concept, called «3-S», that was successfully used to implement the platform.
Main goals of the system is to increase the number of sales, improve customer service, monitoring and analysis, collection of customer information and its actualization. As the result, we built powerful, secure and stable enough system to use in banking environment. Advanced filtering system helps reduce the number of errors related to human factor.
Integration with other internal bank systems in order to synchronize data is done using XML-based services and RPC.
The resulting software complex has significantly contributed to the quality of customer data, rise sales and service level.

SoftVit, LLC
Senior Web Developer, outsource
(Dec 2012 - now)
Brooklyn, NY, US
Career at SoftVit began with the simple task — development of the corporate website and is rapidly gaining momentum. A variety of internal services based on XMLRPC, JSON, SSO system, payment gateway and product licensing platforms were developed.
Active development of innovative projects, such as modern mobile phone data transfer technology, new generation payment system (sms-wallet) and an unique chronological social network are going in parallel. I’m currently at leading web developer position, and I doing all web related tasks.

EDUCATION:

Kherson Physical-Technical Lyceum
High school degree
(Sep 2004 - Jun 2007)
Kherson, Ukraine
2007, Little academy of science contest
Winner of 1-st (city) and 2-nd (state) stages, participant of the 3-rd (Ukrainian) stage
2007, Ukrainian «Ecosoft» contest
Winner of the 1-st stage

Kherson National Technical University
Bachelor degree in computer science

(Sep 2007 - Jun 2011)
Kherson, Ukraine

Kherson National Technical University
Specialist degree in computer science
(post-bachelor, pre-master degree)

(Sep 2011 - May 2012)
Kherson, Ukraine

Contact me:
Cell: XXX-YYY-ZZZ
E-mail: my@email.com
Skype: my.skype.account

Добрый день, ув. форумчане.

Прошу и моё резюме “взять в оборот”.
Интересует правильность направления моих мыслей. Оттачивание и доведения до ума грамматики буду производить после нормализации общей картины.

Заранее благодарен!

IGOR FILAKHTOV
WEB DEVELOPER

Summary: Experienced web-developer with deep knowledges of web-based applications, services and related technologies. Specialized in building social-based services and corporate solutions. Have rich experience in developing successful web-platforms, frameworks and systems from scratch, without using any ready-made solutions. Deep understanding of development process – from designing and planning, up to integration and further support.

Objectives: Seeking for growth oriented position where my professional skills can be utilized. Want to be a part of challenging team, developing of exclusive and innovative web-based software solutions. Interested in social-oriented services development and business processes improvement using best IT practices and solutions.

SKILLS & TECHNOLOGIES:

Primary: 8 years of PHP, MySQL, HTML, XHTML, CSS development; 7 years of JavaScript, DHTML development; OOP, Programming patterns; JSON, AJAX, XML; LAMP stack; Linux/Unix OSes (FreeBSD, Debian, Ubuntu, Gentoo); MVC; Web-services, RPCs; HTTP, HTTPS, SSL, SSH, FTP, SFTP; SVN, Git; W3C standards; Nginx.

Secondary: Linux/Unix shell scripting; Networking security and administration; Wireless networks infrastructure; Adobe Photoshop; Graphics and design concepts; CRM, SCM, ERP solutions.

Complementary: C, C++; Corel Draw; Blender 3D software; Callcenter solutions.

Preffered development environment: Gentoo linux OS, NetBeans IDE.

Languages: Russian, Ukrainian — freely, English — intermediate.

PROFESSIONAL EXPERIENCE:

WebShark Studio (ZWeb Studio)
Co-founder, Senior Web Developer
(Feb 2007 - Aug 2011)
Kherson, Ukraine
Company specialized on creating a wide range of web-applications, starting from basic homepages, ending with fully dynamic, complex business projects with external APIs and custom RPC services. Development was highly focused on performance, security and code standards.
During work in WebShark I have fully switched my development environment to Linux OS. In mid of 2008, company started providing its own hosting system with ISPManager on top of FreeBSD OS, and I began to learn Unix systems administration.
A strong modularized object-oriented database-driven multi purpose web-based platform was built and successfully used in a dozen of projects.
The result of over 4.5 years was the release of the company on Ukrainian market and strengthen its position among competitors.

Raiffeisen Bank Aval
Chief specialist of Internal Processes Technological Support Team, Team lead
(Sep 2011 - Dec 2012)
Kyiv, Ukraine
Raiffeisen Bank Aval is the largest Ukrainian bank with foreign capital. During my career here, I got the experience and understanding of business processes “from within”.
I worked as a manager in a team of 7 developers. Our team has designed, developed and integrated complex CRM solution, used by employees in all 800+ bank’s branches, central office, call center and many other’s divisions every day.
In order to develop such a large complex system, I established a new special concept, called «3-S», that was successfully used to implement the platform.
Main goals of the system is to increase the number of sales, improve customer service, monitoring and analysis, collection of customer information and its actualization. As the result, we built powerful, secure and stable enough system to use in banking environment. Advanced filtering system helps reduce the number of errors related to human factor.
Integration with other internal bank systems in order to synchronize data is done using XML-based services and RPC.
The resulting software complex has significantly contributed to the quality of customer data, rise sales and service level.

SoftVit, LLC
Senior Web Developer, outsource
(Dec 2012 - now)
Brooklyn, NY, US
Career at SoftVit began with the simple task — development of the corporate website and is rapidly gaining momentum. A variety of internal services based on XMLRPC, JSON, SSO system, payment gateway and product licensing platforms were developed.
Active development of innovative projects, such as modern mobile phone data transfer technology, new generation payment system (sms-wallet) and an unique chronological social network are going in parallel. I’m currently at leading web developer position, and I doing all web related tasks.

EDUCATION:

Kherson Physical-Technical Lyceum
High school degree
(Sep 2004 - Jun 2007)
Kherson, Ukraine
2007, Little academy of science contest
Winner of 1-st (city) and 2-nd (state) stages, participant of the 3-rd (Ukrainian) stage
2007, Ukrainian «Ecosoft» contest
Winner of the 1-st stage

Kherson National Technical University
Bachelor degree in computer science
(Sep 2007 - Jun 2011)
Kherson, Ukraine

Kherson National Technical University
Specialist degree in computer science
(post-bachelor, pre-master degree)
(Sep 2011 - May 2012)
Kherson, Ukraine

Contact me:
E-mail: …
Cell: …

Добрый день! Видео смотрел, постарался написать как можно лучше. На данный момент у меня позиция ведущего инженера, в обязанности входит обслуживание биллинговой системы, написание доп. модулей к ней и различных скриптов. Тут же по совместительству занимаюсь администрированием сетевой инфраструкты.

Но по факту, да…Системный администратор-разработчик.

Прошу оценить мое резюме, и вычитать ошибки :slight_smile: особенно связанные с временами, заранее благодарен
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1NK-Vl82qLQovAP0neYnzsFhTgLG-OwfR0B2F8VFJ63o/edit?usp=sharing

линк на гугл докс не захотело вставлять, напишу тут.
Прошу указать на ошибки, особенно граматические, и связаные с временами

ARTEM PODUSTOV
Sevastopol, Ukraine, 99038
Email: a.podustov@gmail.com
Skype: artem.podustov
LinkedIn Profile
+380-50-579-40-91

SUMMARY
Energetic, self-motivated software engineer with 6 year experience of web-based applications, services and related technologies. Deep understanding of development process – from designing and planning, up to integration and further support. Last few years combine web development with mobile application development, have few self produced application from idea to release and placement at appstore. Excellent problem-solving skills.

OBJECTIVES
Seeking company of professionals with interesting projects, where my skills and experience in web-development will be useful and needed, where i can get new experience and professionally grow up. Also will be glad work with mobile projects based on iOS, Android platform.

TECHNICAL PROFILE
Languages: PHP 4 / 5, Objective C (iOS), HTML, Java (Android), C, C++
Script Languages: JavaScript
Services: Amazon Web Service (AWS), PayPal, Intuit(QuickBooks)
Framework: YII, Magento Commerce, x-cart, JQuery, ExtJs, Prototype
Database: MySQL, SQLite
Data Interchange: XML, JSON
Version Control: GIT, SVN
Other Tools: Photoshop
OS: Mac OS X 10.8, Windows XP/ 7, Linux/Unix

EDUCATION
2008 Accelerated M.S. Degrees Programs in computer science, Sevastopol National
2007 B.S. Computer Science, Sevastopol National University Of Nuclear Energy and
Industry
Sevastopol, Ukraine

EXPERIENCE
Software engineer - Web / iPhone / iPad Developer, Intechcenter Ukraine Corporate Office, October 2007 - Present
Accepted active participation on different projects on different stages of it, from design DB, structure of site, to prepare service of server.

  • Participated in project PITBULLTAX as DB structure designer. Developed data input form and preparing printing PDF for irs.gov. Written script to parse national and local IRS standards also for parsing IRS Manual. Reduced manpower needs by fully automatization.
  • Participated in customization and applying frontend design. Shop based on Magento Commerce. Stern’s Furniture.
  • Florida Medical Space, Credit Trust Group Customization small tasks.

Also accept participated on develop mobile application for iOS.

  • OIC Calculator - iOS taxes calculator. Answering a few easy-to follow questions about your current financial situation will produce instantaneous results. If you are qualified for the program, the results will include how much you can settle for, how much you will save, and when and how much you need to pay.
    Mobile client for La Bamba Restaurant based on magento, on this application was used magento api (SOAP). To produce ability to add products in the cart and place order in system.
  • Like indie developer was developed few applications for ios, one application to increase reading speed (Text To Brain), application can parse pdf, docx, odt formats to plain text, another one application to create helpful guides for user (Guider).

EMPLOYMENT AUTHORIZATION
New H1B visa sponsorship required.

Михаил, хотелось бы узнать Ваше мнение о резюме resume.doc (жмите “скачать”, чтобы открыть в ворде, т.к. просмотр на сайте криво показывает документ). Сопроводительное к вакансии тут: cover.doc

Михаил, хотелось бы услышать Ваши совету по резюме resume.doc (жмите “скачать”, чтобы открыть в ворде, просмотр на сайте показывает документ неправильно). Сопроводительно на вакансию тут: cover.doc

Нет смысла изобретать свой собственный формат для резюме - надо посмотреть как люди пишут и сделать в этом ключе.

По содержанию:

  • 70% объема резюме не относятся к искомой позиции
  • 15 лет опыта легли в три хохмочки вместо двух десятков буллетов

Это резюме на мой не маркетинговый взгляд выглядит очень сумбурным, без фокуса, не цепляет, не отвечает на вопрос что я буду иметь в плюсах, наняв этого человека.

Статус иммиграционный вообще не прописан

Был бы признателен за оценку. Авторизация, особо не шифровался там.
(ссылки на проекты выделены синим).

Вы таки будете смеяться, но там прописано название моей текущей позиции, а не искомой.
Т.е. 70% объема резюме это описание того, что я делал и делаю на той позиции, которая там названа.
Проблема же скорее в другом - в том, что я никак не могу найти американское соответствие в названии тому, чем занимаюсь здесь в России. Маркетологи находятся лишь в розничном бизнесе, а в софтверном - одни разработчики, либо технические позиции как пользователи этого софта. Такое впечатление, что я та самая пурпурная белка, которую никто даже не ищет.

Советы же по подготовке резюме от разных специалистов идут буквально противоположные, кого слушать - непонятно. Попробуйте представить себя на месте человека, который не имеет практического знания целевого рынка труда, а только и может, что слушать советы…

Можете предложить что-то конкретное, что с этим делать?

Хочу попросить оценить мое резюме. Живу в Америке уже 5 лет, но только сейчас хочу выйти на маркет (получила грин карту) до этого работала в маленькой компании. Босс был из Украины. Поэтому для меня это как первый шаг. Я уже разослала резюме в разные компании в Нью Йорке но вот ответа уже как 3 недели нет. Уже думаю может в резюме проблема. Из за этого хочу посоветоваться. И еще если кто знает инженерные компании, которые сейчас набирают на работу? Или кто может посоветовать рекрутеров в Чикаго или в Нью Йорке. Буду очень благодарна.

Madina G

OBJECTIVE:
Seeking a structural engineer position to utilize my core technical and design skills effectively thereby significantly contributing my best to the organization.

PROFESSIONAL AND PERSONAL SKILLS:

Five years of experience in analysis and design of building structures;
Proficient in STAAD Pro, Ram Structural System, AutoCAD 2008-2013, and Microsoft office including Word and Excel;
Possess working knowledge of International building code, New York State Building Code, and New York City Building Code, also familiar with Design codes (ASCE, AISC, ACI, National Wood Products Association, American Iron and Steel Institute, Steel Deck institute);
Excellent analytical, problem solving and computational skills combined with high levels of energy and confidence;
Well-developed communication, coordination and team work skills;
Passionate to deliver my best for every project;
Eager to learn the latest advancements and skills for increased professional efficiency.

EDUCATION:

Master of Science, January2010-2012
Manhattan College (Riverdale, New York).
Major – Civil Engineering;
Overall GPA: 3.44

Combined Bachelor and Master of Science, July 2003-2008
Kazan State University of Architecture and Engineering (Kazan, Russia)
Major –Civil and Industrial Engineering;
Overall GPA: 3.4

EXPERIENCE:

Structural Engineer
Design Bureau of L K, New York, NY (Summer 2008 – present)

My responsibilities included:
• Development of the structural engineering drawings and details;
• Design various structural systems, including steel, concrete, wood, and masonry structures;
• Perform structural analysis calculations using governing codes and standards, engineering
formulas, skills, and experience;
• Computer modeling for the mid- and high-rise buildings;
• Computer design of the various types of structures under lateral and gravity type of loads;
• Review shop drawings;
• Coordination of mechanical and architectural drawings with structural drawings;
• Site visits of the project under construction.

Some of my accomplishments:

• 319 Schermerhorn St. (22 story residential, reinforced concrete structure with flat slab.)
I worked on structural design and framing plans together with senior engineer.
• 333Hylan Blvd (Four story medical office. The structural system utilizes concrete fill over metal deck supported by steel framing. The lateral load resisting system is comprised of special steel moment frames)
• 40 N4th street (Seven story residential, reinforced concrete building with flat slab)
• 840 Ocean parkway (Six story residential, reinforced masonry bearing wall building )
• 683-691 Marcy Ave (Eight story steel moment frame building. Floor consists of metal deck with concrete fill supported on steel beams )
• 2640 East 14st. (Fourth story mixed used building .Designed as light gauge steel frame construction)

Junior Engineer

Osta, Kazan, Russia (2007-2008).

My responsibilities included:
• Development of the structural drawings for existing industrial buildings;
• Field measurements and verification of site coordination’s.

COMPUTER SKILLS:

• Operating System: Windows7/ Vista/XP
• Microsoft Office
• Structural: AutoCAD 2008-2013, RAM Structural System, STAAD.PRO, Lira
• Internet ability

LANGUAGE SKILLS:

• English;
• Russian (native).

Прошу совета…
https://docs.google.com/file/d/0B64OPYbPhfl1bXVHWmxkeUhadzA/edit?usp=sharing
заранее спасибо!

Рассматриваю вакансии: водитель, тестер по, сис админом
Каковы шансы найти работу Сис админа без профильного образования?